Some Thoughts I'll Probably Change my Mind about Later

 don’t waste your time with boring books, separating

the iambs from the trochees,

            separating the fire from the art.

there’s no time to analyze all of the pronouns

and conjunctions and the deeper

meaning behind an indifferent, indefinite

article or an oddly placed

enjambment. don’t be so damn disciplined.

 

don’t waste your life aligning the seconds

            in rank and file like indistinguishable

            soldiers   marching to their death,

            in the gym or at a desk or in traffic,

and most of all   don’t take

 

yourself so seriously. seriously,

nobody cares. your silly poems

won’t change the world.

nobody reads anymore anyways, but life

 

is poetry, the greatest poetry, and poetry is free

            and fun and evolving and feeling

            and fiery spontaneity, so stay awake all night

 

weeping about that awkward moment from the seventh grade;

dance barefoot in the kitchen while dinner bubbles over,

raging on the burners; lay in bed for weeks

in your crusty underwear; fill folder after folder with rejection letters.

what does it matter? everyone is too busy with their own

 

nonsense to judge you. be original for breakfast

and gorge on sweet clichés for dessert. life’s a garden;

dig it. sign up for races you know you won’t finish;

go on adventures without plans to make it back;

maybe you’ll surprise yourself. you probably

 

won’t, though. this way, you will never overcome your-

self or life, and you will never become

the human equivalent of kale. enlightened.

tranquil. too cool for school or emotions or reactions

 

like boulder in the ass-crack

of some far off valley that’s only seen one view in a billion years,

like a mass-produced Buddha statue

buried in the wreckage of an earthquake.

***

(Cuenca, Ecuador -- March, 2021)

I really, really wanted to like this poem. It's so close, but something just feels slightly off to me. Maybe it's too preachy or over the top. I was so close to including this on my list of poems that I plan on publishing in journals and/or a poetry collection some day. 

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